Hurt (version 2)

Hello, I am from and I am here to provide you with critique, helpful tips and hints, and also redlines/greenlines on this specific artwork.

Contrast:
The contrast between the background (brighter) and the character (darker) is really nice! Drives all the attention of this piece to the character.
Upper Body:
You did right with the anatomy here! Really good job!
Wings:
I don't see anything wrong about the anatomy here, certainly you can get better (incrementing feathers and details), but there are any mistakes to be pointed. (I think some references are welcome, aren't they? [link] [link] [link])
Noises/Smudges:
Some games indicate us low health visualy with grey scale, noises on the screen, blood drips, red flashes, etc... So I understand (correct me if I'm wrong) you used smudges/noises around the character to represent some hurt/wound (As your title states). Particularly I liked it, just want to warn you to pay attention and don't exagerate on the quantity of noise/smudge on the artwork (it can make the piece not clear/not understandable). But that doesn't happen here, very good work!

Take care about the anatomy, look for references (and tutorials if necessary) and keep praticing to get better!
Lower body:
Maybe it's just my impression, but it seems like his legs are a bit thin (But not wrong anatomically).
Hand:
His fingers are correct, but his hand is small. Remember that your hand is big enough to cover your face (but not your head), this rule is valid for almost all kind of character, except big/exagerated ones. Also pay attention to the proportion of the hand for the arm. [link]
Column end, tail beginning:
It's exactly this, the tail begins at the end of the column. Here the tails is too low. [link]

Redlines/Greenlines: [link]

I hope this was helpful. Thank you for submitting your lovely artwork to our group. We are looking forward to your submissions in the future.
Have a great day!
- Alef-GP